Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
An increasing number of people doing their
work
online and juveniles starting to study remotely Use synonyms
due to
the inexpensive costs of technology. Linking Words
This
essay believes Linking Words
this
trend has negative development and will explain why.
Working remotely and studying gives people flexibility and a chance to stay close to their families. Linking Words
Also
, they do not waste time on the way to Linking Words
work
or school in traffic congestion and wake up early. Use synonyms
Moreover
, minors who prefer to study at Linking Words
home
have their own computers and do not have to carry heavy bags to school, so their back will be healthy in the future. Use synonyms
For example
, during Coronavirus all people did their job and studies at Linking Words
home
, so they can be in safety Use synonyms
while
dangerous diseases.
Individuals who sit all day at Linking Words
home
doing Use synonyms
work
and lessons can harm their health and not have a social life. Sedentary lifestyles lead to slow metabolism and blood circulation so Use synonyms
this
causes a lot of health problems Linking Words
such
as obesity or heart cancer. Linking Words
Furthermore
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due to
their domestic lives, they do not have friends even if they communicate online, Linking Words
this
is not the same as in a real life. Linking Words
For instance
, adolescents and adults who spend their free time at Linking Words
home
said that they do not have good friends with whom they can go walking or cinema.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
online Linking Words
work
and study can be a really beneficial Use synonyms
due to
comfort it has its own drawbacks Linking Words
such
as isolated life and lack of movement leading to health problems.Linking Words
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