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Countries should produce the food that their population eat, and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every
country
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 has its own set of strength in what they produce from the resources they have.
country
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 should be self-sufficient in terms of the production of
food
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 and should be less dependent on other countries.
This
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 essay will argue why it is
benificial
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beneficial
 for the
country
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 to grow most of their own
food
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instead
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 of importing
food
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 below. There are many potential reasons why countries should produce their meal. Local
food
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 will be less affordable so everyone can buy that bread and eat it.When
food
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 is imported transport cost is
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 paid by the consumer which will make nutrition more expensive than if it is produced locally .
for example
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 ,In Pakistan cooking oil is imported and way more expensive than in Indonesia because in Indonesia
this
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 is produced locally than in Pakistan.Traditionally for many ,nations it is shame that their feed is coming from other countries they have self-doubt the whole nation can't even produce their own
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.There are many reasons that
food
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 should be produced locally. Consuming local products will reduce the cost of transporting goods which is expensive. Some raw products
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 require high maintenance of imported products to keep good quality, and it will make the high prices of the
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 product as the consequence.
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, not all people can afford the high prices of
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 on a daily basis. Taking an example, imported meat requires a big freezer in the transporting process which is cost a lot of money. Unsurprisingly, imported meat is more expensive than local meat.
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,It is beneficial economically and from the national security point too that the
country
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 should produce its own
food
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 because the whole nation can not rely on others to feed them
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 they will pay.other will be not there in though time and sometimes it is not even possible so every
country
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 should grow their own
food
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-sufficiency
  • trade dependency
  • food security
  • sustainable agriculture
  • local economies
  • carbon footprint
  • supply chain
  • food miles
  • agricultural sector
  • domestic production
  • import substitution
  • food sovereignty
  • global supply chains
  • trade imbalances
  • food standards
  • economic resilience
  • biodiversity
  • cultural heritage
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