Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that it has become so difficult to live in major
cities
.
However
, other believe that it has become
more
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easier to reside in metropolitan
cities
compared to recent years.
This
essay will discuss both
the
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views and provide a suitable conclusion. There are several reasons why most people think that living in
cities
have
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become
more
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harder .
Firstly
, crimes are really high in
cities
compared to other places and the main reason why
this
is because ; of
living
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expense to reside in cosmopolitan
cities
as
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a result
of
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people become
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force
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to commit crimes like robbery and illegal activities so that they earn money for living .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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