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Scientists that computers will become more intelligent than human Some find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development. Discuss points and give your own opinion.

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Nowdays
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 IT and artificial intelligence are widely used in daily life globally, so research and
developement
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development
 in that field are done constantly.
Although
 I think that technology is very useful for different things, I do not agree that it would be positive if computers become more intelligent than
people
. Computers are used in all segments of humans
life
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 today including science, research, safety, medicine and
other
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others
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 because, very often, they can provide more precise and accurate information and data in some fields
such
 as
matematical
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mathematical
 solutions, statistics,
biomethrical
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biometrical
 patterns and similar, so using them we can exclude the mistakes that human
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 makes. It is very real to expect that a computer can make more objective decisions and counts, so some
people
 think that it would be
great
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improvment
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improvement
 to put it above
human
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the human
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 mind.
On the other hand
, a computer can not have ethical and moral values
in contrast
 with
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people
. Considering that a human is
super
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 complex and unique creature
that is
summary
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 of all of his experiences and knowledge, he is capable to make decisions
according
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 them, so there is no possible way to copy that into
arificial
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artificial
 intelligence. Emotions that
people
 can feel
along with
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the capabillity
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capabillity
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capability
 to act
according
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 socially acceptable patterns are the things that make
structure
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the structure
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 of the society the way
as
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we
know
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, so if we come to the point where
computer
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computers
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, that will never have
ability
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 to feel emotions or behave by ethical and moral standards, make decisions above
people
, we might destroy society structure and risk devotion of our species. In conclusion,
although
 development in the IT sector is positive and can bring a lot of benefits to
people
,
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 if computers become more intelligent than us
humenkind
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humankind
 could be destroyed.
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