A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter 1)Describe what this book was about 2)Explain how this book influenced you 3)Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.

Dear Sir or Madam. Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to let you know about the wonderful experience had with the
book
called ‘The Army’. The
book
was fundamentally based on the Indian army, where it narrates about the lifestyle, habitats, rules and regulations and
also
the training they would undergo tirelessly to achieve higher positions at a different level. I was particularly influenced by the lifestyle of soldiers mainly the disciples they adapt to. They are never giving up attitude would be built so rigid that no one can break their will so easily. Where most of the common people would fail to live a life like them.
Also
, their selfless sacrifices to work for the nations regardless of any mental and physical stress makes them unsung heroes. I believe
this
book
would definitely leave an impression on many young minds to adopt
such
principles in their lifestyle. Thank you for giving us these opportunities to share our experiences. Hoping to see an article on
this
book
. Yours faithfully, Mathew Abhishek
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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