You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You do not fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter -Say which points in the article you agree with -Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other towns - Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you with regards to an article published in your reputed daily newspaper "Newzealand Highlights" which says that all the town centres in our nation are more or less the same. By the medium of

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letter, I want to show my disagreement with

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claim. I certainly agree that they are quite similar in terms of architectural work as these are assigned to only one company for their construction and hospitality provided to the visitors because

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what our country is known for;

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, we always encounter respect and love wherever we

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in our country.

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, I do not agree with the point that these are built up in an equal area of land. The town centres in my hometown Manitoba are much bigger than any other town centres in Canada and are worth giving a

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to. Now, I would like you to pay a

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to my city as and when you get some free time. I am really sure

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visit

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will help you change your perspective and I would like to guide you personally on

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tour. Looking forwards to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Jenny Rose

kaurmamta3Thu Feb 23 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

199 words

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