The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare the structural developments and the transformation of a
village
called Stockford between 1930 and 2010. A glance at the maps reveals that Stockford
village
in 1930 had fewer
houses
and extended farmland but witnessed rapid housing development afterwards. As is observed, Stockford
village
is located at the east of the River Stoke. Parallel to
this
river, the main
road
has connected a bridge
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the farthest northeast side of the
village
in both maps. A few
houses
on both sides of the
road
, two shops and a post office on the west side of the
road
were present in
this
village
in 1930.
Besides
, an elementary school, a large garden and a connecting
road
to the bridge were on the east of
this
village
. Two large farmlands were quite visible on the early map which disappeared in the latter one. The 2010's map reveals that the post office, the bridge and the primary school remained unaltered, though, the school building was enlarged. The shops disappeared and the garden with many of its trees was compromised to build more accommodation facilities. The large house was converted into a retirement home with some extensions to its structure. On top of that, the number of
houses
increased remarkably and these
houses
were built on the previously existing farmlands and gardens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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