In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The recent advancement in automotive
technology
envisages the introduction of hands-free cars in the future. As these cars would be artificially intelligent to commute the passengers to different locations. Before reaping its benefits we must have to evaluate its implications in the social, economic and ecological domains. In many ways,
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of automobiles can overcome many challenges.
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, Traffic congestion is becoming a daunting challenge in urban life and spending hours in traffic may decrement the energy level of any person but
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the introduction of driverless
technology
passengers will feel more at ease and the problems related to traffic congestion will
also
be eliminated. In
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addition
, ecological concerns
such
as
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increment
in carbon footprints will
also
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his
technology
as hands-free cars will be based upon electronic
technology
.
Moreover
, a reduction in accidents may occur because a sophisticated control system based on radars and sensors will pilot the car rather than humans. As
technology
,advances it brings different natures of challenges.
For example
. Upcoming intelligent automobiles will be based upon artificially intelligent
technology
which is controlled through any dedicated controller and
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the
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advancements
in
technology
it will
also
be powered by the
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this
case the cyber security
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concerns
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be raises
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as in
this
case that
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automobiles
are prone to
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and it may lead to the
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invasion
in
passngers
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passengers
passenger
data privacy or hijacking of
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may
also
be possible. Another concern is related to the massive unemployment as a number of people are related to the conventional
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automobile
technology
and in case of mass adaption of these
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vehicles a severe unemployment impulse will be generated. To
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recapitulate
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, I believe
technology
advances
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because
we need it . We cannot control the spread of
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technology because
it will find its own ways.
Therefore
, We have to embrace the challenges and
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create
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to counter it because avoiding the
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advancement
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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