In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some
people
assert that governments should raise the tax
on fast food
because eating such
food
too much
leads to Change the quantifier
many
health
problems. There are two reasons to support this
idea: firstly
, this
action will discourage people
to have unhealthy food
and secondly
, governments will be able to allocate amounts of money to health
care.
First of all, we must recognize that people
tend to eat fast food
too much because this
food
is more economical than healthy food
. This
can include French fries and hamburgers. By way of an example, young people
who are indifferent to their health
condition, are likely to eat too much fast food
. According to
an article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper published last
month, 60% of young people
such
as university students in Japan regularly purchase unhealthy food
,especially from MacDonald’s rather than better-quality cuisine. As a result
, they easily suffer from diseases such
as not only diabetes but also
cancer.
Secondly
, governments can invest more money in health
care. In fact, research recently conducted by the university of Tokyo discovered that the government in Japan can spend 6 billion dollars more a year on improving the health
conditions of their citizens if the rate of tax
on fast food
increases 15
% from 10%. Change preposition
by 15
Therefore
, the Ministry of Health
in Japan is now considering to impose
a higher Change the verb form
imposing
tax
on such
food
to improve the health
condition of their citizens.
In conclusion, there are significant advantages to rising the tax
on fast food
higher such
as preventing people
from eating unhealthy food
and spending more funds on health
care. We must consider these benefits.Submitted by ryohei.1015.golf on
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