In the future all cars, bues and trucks will be driverless. The only people traevelling inside these vehichcles will be passengers. Do you think the adventages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

(10+3) It is true that never before have scientists invented cutting-edge science
such
as nanobots. (15+16) The more homework you were done, the higher achievement you attained. (3 + 21) To protect the environment, not only should we reduce pollution, but more reusable products we can use. (17+11) The
government
should buy itself more time implementing effective policies to deal with
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road
is
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being congested because of the detriment brought by the typhoon. (6+2) Inventing more useful facilitated technologies,
such
as reliable telecommunication tools, is a goal for every
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. (4+6) Balancing
proportion
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of time between rest and study will be an effective way to achieve higher academic results. (17+25) Students should follow the instructions produced by teachers, preventing themselves from harmful attractions
such
as drugs. (21+5) To handle the destruction produced by the typhoon, not only should the
government
implement some direct and effective policies, but
also
it should consider what compensations are suitable for the people’s loss. (5+ 12) Teachers being responsible for leading teenagers can provide some necessary assistance to students. (19+25) They find that society is not as ideal as they think after they graduate from university, taking responsibility in working
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and handling conflict between clients and advisers. (14+8) These regulations which are implemented directly by the chief executive are to improve the quality of air. (8+21) Not only can new regulations implemented by the
government
reduce air pollution, but
also
they can improve the quality of water. (16+2) These innovative companies, especially those lacking initial funding, can be supported by the
government
's policies, enlarging their size in financial markets. (18+5) The teacher’s task is to assist
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to deal
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with what academic difficulties they face. (16+24)
It is clear that
a number of patients suffering from rare illnesses can be helped by
this
major breakthrough in medication manufacturing. (1+17) Many people believe that it is good for mental health if they buy themselves a favourite food.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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