The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the
number
of enquires
Correct your spelling
enquiries
recevied
by the Tourist Information Office over a six-month period in 2011. There are three Correct your spelling
received
enquery
methods, in Correct your spelling
enquiry
person
, by letter
/email
and by telephone
.
Overall
, during this
six-month period, in
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in-person
person
and by
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by-telephone
telephone
enquiries
had a big growth. By contrast
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
enqueries
by Correct your spelling
enquiries
letter
or email
had a slightly
drop. Until Jun 2011, there are 4 times more users Change the adverb
slight
choose
Correct pronoun usage
who choose
in
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in-person
person
enquery
and Correct your spelling
enquiry
by
Change preposition
apply
telephone
enquery
than Correct your spelling
enquiry
by
Change preposition
apply
letter
/email
.
Looking at the details. In Jan 2011, telephone
is the most popular way to Add an article
the telephone
a telephone
enquery
, Correct your spelling
enquiry
number
of by Correct article usage
the number
letter
/email
enquiries
is not significantly different from telephone
. And the Add an article
the telephone
a telephone
number
of in
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in-person
person
enquiries
is the lowest, around 400. But, dramatically, the number
of in
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in-person
person
enquiries
is rapidly
growth in after six Change the adverb
rapid
month
. Until Jun 2011, it began the biggest Change to a plural noun
months
enquiries
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