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Some people think schools should group pupils according to their academic ability, but others believe pupils with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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there are people who believe that schools ought to group
students
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 their academic
skills
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on the other
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, others feel
students
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 who have different
skills
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 ought to be educated in the same
class
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. in my ,opinion I believe that having different
classes
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 regarding their abilities is the best way to achieve better results. On
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hand
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, having different groups of
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 their
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 could bring many advantages for each individual,
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 as an increase in the velocity of their development of knowledge.
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, having the same
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 with the same abilities does not stop the learning journey and helps, even more, to improve their rapidly their
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 by being more efficient in that
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,
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, their how to study science in the sport they will improve even faster if their study with the same
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 having the opportunity of changing ideas and knowledge making them more proficient in their
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, the opportunity of being with people with different abilities in the same
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 leads to improvement in those weak areas where
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 are struggling. Having no option to improve their weakness.
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, if you put someone who is not really good at mathematics with another student who is really good at
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. they will help
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 another and in some ,cases it is even more efficient than a teacher trying to explain the subject. In my opinion, I believe that having different
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 regard to
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 and levels helps to improve specifically in the
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 that you must enjoy and you are good at. In my opinion, Being more efficient in
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 only
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 is way more productive than being average in many areas.
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, if you are good at economics the best way to achieve results is by following that field
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 of trying to improve another subject. because in they will apply their
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 in their careers.
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 having different
classes
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 regarding
skills
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 and levels will help
students
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 to develop in
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area
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 being more proficient in
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 subject.
on the other
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hand
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, having
classes
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 together will help
students
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 that are struggling with some areas to push them to improve it.
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