The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

The following bar chart illustrates the best online actions adults make in Slovakia at a specific time in summer.
Overall
, it can be easily seen that society mostly uses the global web for communication and getting in touch with each other
Furthermore
the majority of users engage with their money. To start with, the most unpopular activity listed in the data is job hunting which takes only one-fifth,
although
it is the only activity which is equal for both males and females. Dramatical contrast over 25% could be seen in health research. For internet banking and social ,networking ladies have the same demand, whilst for ,gentlemen it is using social networking and email. The peak activity
that is
being shown is using email where women are mostly playing a role. In conclusion, women overcome men in every aspect of internet usage
additionally
society mostly uses the internet for the entertainment sphere. Particular parts of life like education and jobs are disfavoured.
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