You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

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some countries build high-quality

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sports

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facilities

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, many public cannot

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there, because it is built only for

athletes

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. In my opinion,

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trend will have a negative impact.

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with, there are several positive aspects.

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, many sportsmen should more focus on their training. Special

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can provide

athletes

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with high-quality

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equipment and professional curriculums. It can help them to more concentrate on their training.

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, the

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industry can be grown up. If the governments invest money in

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industry, the number of

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can increase. A lot of

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can produce good results

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as winning competitions with other countries. It is the best way to develop the

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industry.

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, reasons why it is a negative development. First of all, the public cannot

use

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high-quality

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sports

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facilities

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. Many people in modern society have diseases

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as obesity, heart

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and so on. If they do exercise frequently, they can improve their health. So high-quality

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sports

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facilities

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important for the public.

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, some people who prefer doing exercise can have complaints. A lot of people who like

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want to go

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sports

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facilities

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. If they cannot

use

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it there, they will have complaints. It has a negative effect on

sports

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facilities

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. In conclusion, in my opinion, the negative aspects are stronger than the positive development.

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, the governments encourage

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to

use

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sports

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facilities

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.