The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates how solar
panels
in everyday life provide electric energy
. It can be seen that the product that we obtain through this
cyclical process is electricity
. The stages are three and the cycle starts from the sky, with the sun's energy
and finishes in our houses as electricity
.
Firstly
, the various solar panels
in some houses absorb the sun's energy
which is transformed into DC current. Under these panels
, there is an Inverter which is used to make AC current from DC current while
it controls both electricity
and production. Finally
, the electricity
is distributed into the home by electrical panels
.
It is important to notice that the utility meter that is
used to detect any excess of
solar Change preposition
apply
electricity
which
will flow back by the meter. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Whereas
the utility grid is used to provide electric energy
when in the house the average product by solar panels
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Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, energy, electricity with synonyms.
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