The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure illustrates how solar
panels
in everyday life provide electric
energy
. It can be seen that the product that we obtain through
this
cyclical process is
electricity
. The stages are three and the cycle starts from the sky, with the sun's
energy
and finishes in our houses as
electricity
.
Firstly
, the various solar
panels
in some houses absorb the sun's
energy
which is transformed into DC current. Under these
panels
, there is an Inverter which is used to make AC current from DC current
while
it controls both
electricity
and production.
Finally
, the
electricity
is distributed into the home by electrical
panels
. It is important to notice that the utility meter
that is
used to detect any excess
of
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solar
electricity
which
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will flow back by the meter.
Whereas
the utility grid is used to provide electric
energy
when in the house the average product by solar
panels
exceeded
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, energy, electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • solar panels
  • electricity
  • domestic use
  • renewable energy
  • photovoltaic cells
  • sunlight
  • generate
  • store
  • inverter
  • power grid
  • environmentally friendly
  • efficient
  • cost-effective
  • sustainable
  • reliable
  • alternative
  • traditional
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • emissions
  • solar energy
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • reduces
  • dependency
  • conclusion
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