The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates how solar
panels
in everyday life provide electric Use synonyms
energy
. It can be seen that the product that we obtain through Use synonyms
this
cyclical process is Linking Words
electricity
. The stages are three and the cycle starts from the sky, with the sun's Use synonyms
energy
and finishes in our houses as Use synonyms
electricity
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the various solar Linking Words
panels
in some houses absorb the sun's Use synonyms
energy
which is transformed into DC current. Under these Use synonyms
panels
, there is an Inverter which is used to make AC current from DC current Use synonyms
while
it controls both Linking Words
electricity
and production. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
electricity
is distributed into the home by electrical Use synonyms
panels
.
It is important to notice that the utility meter Use synonyms
that is
used to detect any excess Linking Words
of
solar Change preposition
apply
electricity
Use synonyms
which
will flow back by the meter. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Whereas
the utility grid is used to provide electric Linking Words
energy
when in the house the average product by solar Use synonyms
panels
exceededUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, energy, electricity with synonyms.
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