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Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case?what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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An increasing number of
people
 have chosen to work on their own business rather than working for another company.
This
 has become a trend because of the new opportunities and the competition
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 the world.
This
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 causes
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this
 situation and its disadvantages. The first reason to choose independent jobs is the less income that
people
 get from their regular jobs. More companies pay low-level salaries to their employees to increase their profit.
As a result
, these labours quite
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 jobs and tend to open new businesses, as they believe it can bring more money. The second reason is the opportunities in the current business world. With the advancement in every
industry
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 many new chances have opened and those who have
desire
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 to start a new company definitely take those chances. It is true that starting up a new company benefits
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the owners in most cases but more than 80% of these businesses bring disadvantages. The main disadvantage is the risk of failure. For an instance,
people
 who started new businesses in
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 industry failed
due to
 the coronavirus pandemic. Another drawback would be
loosing
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 sales
due to
 new technological advancements. Many folks believe that they can earn more money by selling items like arts and crafts, but
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present, these items are undervalued because of the arrival of artificial intelligence and other computer programs. These technologies can create any sort of arts and crafts without spending a lot of money, and
as a result
, many freelancers lose their demand and
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customer base drastically.
To conclude
, nowadays a considerable number of
people
 becoming
freelances
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 because of
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opportunities and financial problems.
However
, most of them experience unpleasant experiences upon their choices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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