The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the venues visited by Canadian citizens with diverse origins.
Overall
, the cinema
is the most popular public place among people
living in Canada, and the least number of people
prefer theatre. To begin
with, the majority of people
who were born in Canada visited the cinema
, accounting for 70%; the zoo and library are relatively equally welcomed, which means almost 40% of indigenous dwellers visited them. Similarly
, 60% of new migrants born in English-speaking countries
went to the cinema
, and the zoo is less popular with 50% of visitors, followed by the library with 40% of migrants from English-spoken countries
. However
, more than half of people
born in other nations went to the library, and the cinema
and zoo are less well-known with separately 50% and 35% visitors. In addition
, in the category of theatre, merely 10% of migrants from other countries
went there, but the data of people
originating from English-speaking countries
is approximately over 25%.
In conclusion, Canadian individuals with different birth locations have divergent preferences for public sites.Submitted by yuetongli98 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema, people, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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