Mrs barrett an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter 1)Suggest how you could help her in her home 2) Say why you would like to do this work 3) Explain when you will and will not be available Begin with Dear Mrs Barrett,
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter in regards
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looking after your home during the summer.
I would like to volunteer myself Change preposition
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helping your day, today activities like maintaining your backyard cleanness regularly, Change preposition
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groceries, Change preposition
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medicines
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due to
the effect of heat in the summer you would be facing issues in driving under that bad light. Also
, I would join your hands in taking care of your tax paying, enquiring about the
health insurance and pension. Only in case Correct article usage
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if
you feel comfortable because it is Correct word choice
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the
matter of money where few feel it needs to be private.
If you wonder about my experience Correct article usage
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over
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volunteering task. I have been carrying out this
task past 3 years, due to
the effect of my ignorance towards my grandmother which caused her death. I came to know after
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these guilt
I have been helping out these people who are in need.
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Apart from
this
to mention about
my availability. I will be at your service anywhere between 7:00 am to evening 6:00pm over the weekdays and completely available over the weekdays. Since I am a freelancer most of my work would be carried out over the night.
Thank you for Change preposition
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opportunity, soon possible would like to hear out from your decision. And take care of your health.
Yours, faithfully
Andrew Mathews.Submitted by nlchiranth11 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite