The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

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The given chart presents information regarding the amount of both male and female research students in scientific fields

such

physics

astronomy

, geology,

biology

medicine

and veterinary

medicine

Overall

according to

the data given, there are more men than women in research, with the most researched field being

biology

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both genders, and the least being

astronomy

altogether. The preferred categories of study by males appear to be

Biology

Physics

and

Medicine

, with the number of pupils being nearly 250, a little above 200 and 200 respectively. Female students seem to follow the trend, with an exception being Veterinary

Medicine

, replacing

physics

. The concurrent numbers are 200 in

Biology

, right below 200 in

Medicine

and the only field resulting in fewer males – Veterinary

Medicine

with a little above 100. The areas with the least interest in men are

Astronomy

and Geology with an equal amount of 150 students per. The chart displays the lowest involvement in

Physics

and

Astronomy

by women.

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