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The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
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The given chart presents information regarding the amount of both male and female research students in scientific fields
such
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physics
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,
astronomy
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, geology,
biology
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medicine
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 and veterinary
medicine
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.
Overall
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,
according to
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 the data given, there are more men than women in research, with the most researched field being
biology
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both genders, and the least being
astronomy
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 altogether. The preferred categories of study by males appear to be
Biology
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,
Physics
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 and
Medicine
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, with the number of pupils being nearly 250, a little above 200 and 200 respectively. Female students seem to follow the trend, with an exception being Veterinary
Medicine
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, replacing
physics
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. The concurrent numbers are 200 in
Biology
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, right below 200 in
Medicine
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 and the only field resulting in fewer males – Veterinary
Medicine
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 with a little above 100. The areas with the least interest in men are
Astronomy
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 and Geology with an equal amount of 150 students per. The chart displays the lowest involvement in
Physics
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 and
Astronomy
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 by women.
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