The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.

The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a UK university in 2009.
The given chart presents information regarding the amount of both male and female research students in scientific fields
such
as
physics
,
astronomy
, geology,
biology
medicine
and veterinary
medicine
.
Overall
,
according to
the data given, there are more men than women in research, with the most researched field being
biology
by
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both genders, and the least being
astronomy
altogether. The preferred categories of study by males appear to be
Biology
,
Physics
and
Medicine
, with the number of pupils being nearly 250, a little above 200 and 200 respectively. Female students seem to follow the trend, with an exception being Veterinary
Medicine
, replacing
physics
. The concurrent numbers are 200 in
Biology
, right below 200 in
Medicine
and the only field resulting in fewer males – Veterinary
Medicine
with a little above 100. The areas with the least interest in men are
Astronomy
and Geology with an equal amount of 150 students per. The chart displays the lowest involvement in
Physics
and
Astronomy
by women.
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