Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
agree that volunteering Use synonyms
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will benefit the young generation and Use synonyms
also
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community
cohesion. Use synonyms
While
I agree that assigning an appropriate workload of volunteer jobs to teenagers would encourage them to realize the importance of responsibility in the association they Linking Words
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in, I Use synonyms
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agree that all efforts put into volunteering Linking Words
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could affect their academic performance as a student.
The main reason why I believe that volunteering activities would be beneficial to the young is that working with peers contributes to enhancing the social skills of young Use synonyms
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. Joining a volunteer group with friends from the Use synonyms
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would improve teenagers’ multiple abilities Use synonyms
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as cooperation, communication and other practical skills. Linking Words
Besides
, adults are usually too busy to help the elder neighbours who are indeed the helping hands, Linking Words
while
their kids are more flexible and available to assist those older Linking Words
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. Use synonyms
For example
, young children can help disabled aged Linking Words
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with garden cleaning. Use synonyms
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, tightening the bonds of the neighbouring residents and enabling a harmonious Linking Words
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However
, the young generation should put their educational achievements as the first priority and Linking Words
then
be able to consider sacrificing the rest time for neighbourhood volunteering. It is because the energy of the individual is limited, so young adults should organise themselves in a reasonable schedule instating of putting all efforts into volunteering in their free time. Linking Words
Additionally
, we can not rule out the possibility that unpaid Linking Words
work
is sometimes tedious and strenuous, Use synonyms
thus
making students waste much time on the jobs. Linking Words
For instance
, volunteers at the food bank in the Linking Words
community
usually distribute food to low-income families. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is necessary to consider the disadvantages before letting pupils Linking Words
work
for free.
In conclusion, I think meaningful volunteer Use synonyms
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is of considerable importance to the young generation in social progress, and they should Use synonyms
also
make sure it is suited to their needs.Linking Words
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