Some people believe that students work better if the teacher is strict; others think it is better for students, if the teacher has a friendly approach. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

When we go to school, we will meet all kinds of

teachers

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， they are

kind

, they are positive but very responsible. They often bring different feelings to

students

, some

students

like

kind

,

some

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students

like positive

teachers

, because it keeps some naughty and some unintentional

students

in check。 A large proportion of

students

prefer a strict

teacher

who is not easy to be messed with, because

this

kind

of

teacher

is very disciplined and responsible, and can help

students

get rid of many bad habits. In

this

age of plenty of food and clothing, I believe that many

students

do not have any self-discipline when they study, and do not put all their attention on

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, at

this

time, those strict

teachers

are needed to supervise

students

'

study

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, to get a good learning atmosphere for the school,

this

is the role of strict

teachers

. Perhaps some

students

will thank their strict

teachers

for helping them get rid of bad habits when they go out into

the

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society.

However

amiable

teachers

are

easily

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to

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communicate with

students

will be more willing to take the initiative to understand the various situations of

students

in a timely manner, and they can make friends, talk,

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some life or psychological troubles.

Students

need not only grades

,

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but

also

healthy psychology

,

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because

teachers

used to be

students

, so they can pass on some valuable experience. In my opinion, strict

teachers

are

also

for the better development of

students

. With the advance of The Times, if you want to gain greater competitiveness, you must improve your education and ability. In the case of no self-discipline, only strict

teachers

can supervise you. In conclusion, strict

teacher

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or

kind

teacher

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or,

they

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are the guide in your life

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, relying on their own to explore the whole world, I hope we can learn from the

teacher

's experience,

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detours.