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Some clam that not enough of the waste is recycled from homes. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the same?

#clam #waste #homes #government #requirement
Over the past few decades, the Usage of
plastic
products
 becomes high. It is a public opinion that
,
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 Government should more focus on the legal requirements to increase recycling rather than from home. I vehemently agree with the given statement. In the modern era, Non recycled
products
 cause harm to the environment. Nowadays pollution is everywhere. It's difficult to see a place without pollution. The law against
this
 matter exists, but people are not
following
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.
This
 is because of fearless
in
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 the law. There are so many countries,
such
 as
uae
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UAE
 and new zealand, that intend to become
plastic less
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country
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. They have very strict laws and people who are not following will get huge fines and punishment. They are using
products
 like Paper bags and glass bottles,
instead
 of
plastic
 items and they are keeping a separate waste bin for recycling
products
.
For instance
,in a survey conducted by the environmental department in 2018, the usage of
plastic
is
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gradually decreased from the period of 2010 to 2017.
This
 is because of the high involvement of authorities in these countries.
Likewise
 Higher authorities in each country should focus on
this
 area.
In addition
 to
this
, Government should conduct
an awareness programmes
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 for the public about the
products
 that can be recycled and non-recycled. And
also
 they should implement a law or fines for throwing or using
plastic
. To cite an example, In supermarkets, They should only give paperless bags. and introduce some eco-friendly
products
.
To conclude
, Government wants to take
the
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responsibility
of
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this
 serious issue. Our motive is to 'go green'. Hopefully, in the
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 future
this
 issue will vanish.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Mandatory recycling
  • Government intervention
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
  • Recycling infrastructure
  • Environmental conservation
  • Public awareness campaigns
  • Compliance
  • Legal enforcement
  • Resource recovery
  • Circular economy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Eco-consciousness
  • Sanitation regulations
  • Green initiatives
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