A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________,

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Hi Amy, I am so glad to receive your email, and
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feel happy to hear that you and your boyfriend are going camping
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long weekend. I bet you will definitely enjoy it.
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month I went camping with my family at the same campsite as the one you are going to
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time. The location is obviously wonderful, with access to both lakes and forests. You can enjoy
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time, spending the whole afternoon under the warm sunshine, or hiking in the quiet trails, breathing the fresh air. But as you have to set the tent in the forest and be close to the bush, remember to bring a good spray to prevent the annoying flies and bugs. I could not sleep well with the bites of the bugs all night. By the way, thank you for your invitation
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time. Frankly speaking, my boyfriend and I are extremely excited to join you and your boyfriend. It's a cool opportunity for double dating. Warm regards, Amber
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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