You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Letter Dear Mr David I am excited to join your organization as a Software Developer.

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, I am writing to inform you that I can not make it on the arranged date. I was supposed to join the team on 13 January, but something came up. Currently, I am on

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vacation in Iceland, and my return flight to New York was cancelled because a volcano had erupted. As you might have heard from the latest news, the volcanic eruption started approximately 120 kilometres from the country’s capital city London, where I am now. I am safe, hardly

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lava flows pose an immediate threat to people, but unfortunately, all regular flights for the next week were cancelled.

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, the government is working on organizing evacuation flights. So I hope to come home on the nearest provided plane, which is pre-planned for 16 January. I am sorry for the inconvenience and will keep you updated. Yours faithfully, Tim Ronald Adolat

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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9 paragraphs

160 words

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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

in today's world many people own a smartphone. do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Many high school students take part time jobs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.