It is thought by some that it’s better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Population growth and urbanisation are

inevitable

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sequel

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of globalisation. Technology and power have grown beyond

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leaps and bounds. There is a large flock of

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crowd

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turning towards the

cities

due

the

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better

opportunities

offered by them. Some people assert that it is pertinent that we live in the city

while

others prefer to be in the

countryside

. There are both pros and cons to

this

, and

this

essay delves into both views before stating an opinion. Primarily, there are better

opportunities

for employment in

cities

, as they garner major corporates and other facilities. Better employment

opportunities

result in better wages

as well as

better quality of

life

.

Moreover

, better healthcare facilities are anchored in the

cities

which makes

cities

more habitable.

For instance

, more than eighty

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of the population in the Northern Territory are living in Darwin and

near by

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cities

for better access to

work

, education, and medical aid.

Further

, the

cities

are considered

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epitome of social

life

due to

better

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life

and shopping

opportunities

.

This

retail therapy and social

life

succour in reducing

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work

stress and thereby improve

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mental health.

Besides

improving

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mental health, it will

also

magnify

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work

productivity. To illustrate, the IT companies in Melbourne orchestrate monthly social

gathering

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, as they proved to increase not only

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productivity but

also

the quality of the

work

. Shifting towards the second school of thought,

countryside

life

is more peaceful and stress-free with better social connectivity. Social empowerment and connection are the

precursor

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of healthy

aging

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. One

such

example is the increased

life

expectancy of Japanese village dwellers

incomparison

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in comparison

with people living in Tokyo. On top of that, as there is minuscule traffic in

countryside

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, there will be lesser pollution.

This

will

consequently

result in better health and production in an environment conducive to other flora and fauna

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. Better productivity and

life

expectancy of people in rural parts of Kerala illustrate the point. To summarise, two points of the argument concerning the prospect of

better

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habitable place, have strong points.

However

, after a thorough analysis, I opine that city

life

is better than

countryside

life

due to

better access to

medical

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system, employment

opportunities

and other facilities.