Write a letter neighbor restaurant owner to reduce noise. Introduce yourself What is your reason What will you do if the issue persists

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Dear manager, I am living wall-to-wall with your new restaurant and, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention towards the noise of your cafe which disturbs us a lot. I and my family shifted to

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house 3 months back because of some medical issues with my mother-in-law. I preferred

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house because it is situated far from the hustle and bustle of the roads and markets,

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, unfortunately, for one month we are so disappointed by the noise of your restaurant. Many times I came and requested your staff not to play music loudly as my mom-in-law has a sleep disorder and her health goes worse when there is a lack of proper sleep.

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will be my

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request to you and if no action is taken on

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situation I will be helpless to inform the higher authorities in

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area. I was wondering if you could pay attention to the above issue. Yours sincerely, Sana.

drsanaghaniFri Feb 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Write a letter neighbor restaurant owner to reduce noise. Introduce yourself What is your reason What will you do if the issue persists

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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