You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say : * why you want to come to the restaurant and when * how many people will attend the dinner * what special requirements you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am the Head of the Events Management Team for the Singapore Diagnostics Company Party that will be held in your
restaurant
on the 26th of March 2023. In connection with
this
, I
also
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to request that our team and I could ocular visit your
restaurant
on March 6, 2023, so that we can already start planning the stage design and
also
to see your function hall because
according to
your website, you offer many function hall in your
restaurant
that we can rent in accordance with the total of persons coming to the party. The team's event will likely have 300 guests and will have their own plus one coming. so we wanted to look in one of your function halls to accommodate the 300 pax invited. The company's CEO suggested having a little program so it requires a lot more time staying and renting in your
restaurant
. In ,addition the CEO required us to include a sound bar and a cocktail bar to have in the Company's event for the after-party so his employees will have fun after the main event. I will discuss more on the day of the ocular visit. Should you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me at 09178992889. Yours Sincerely, Nerissa De Peralta
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