You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say : * why you want to come to the restaurant and when * how many people will attend the dinner * what special requirements you have

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am the Head of the Events Management Team for the Singapore Diagnostics Company Party that will be held in your

restaurant

on the 26th of March 2023. In connection with

this

, I

also

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to request that our team and I could ocular visit your

restaurant

on March 6, 2023, so that we can already start planning the stage design and

also

to see your function hall because

according to

your website, you offer many function hall in your

restaurant

that we can rent in accordance with the total of persons coming to the party. The team's event will likely have 300 guests and will have their own plus one coming. so we wanted to look in one of your function halls to accommodate the 300 pax invited. The company's CEO suggested having a little program so it requires a lot more time staying and renting in your

restaurant

. In ,addition the CEO required us to include a sound bar and a cocktail bar to have in the Company's event for the after-party so his employees will have fun after the main event. I will discuss more on the day of the ocular visit. Should you have any questions please do not hesitate to contact me at 09178992889. Yours Sincerely, Nerissa De Peralta

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

227 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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