You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The
book
Correct your spelling
bookstore
store
maps illustrate the revolution in 2000 and Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the currently
currently
map.
Change the word
current
Overall
, it is clearly observed that in 2000, the amount of Linking Words
fiction
sector Use synonyms
occupied
by the vast majority Add a missing verb
was occupied
in
the Change preposition
of
store
and followed by non-Use synonyms
fiction
and other categories. Use synonyms
Whereas
, presently, the Linking Words
fiction
Use synonyms
area
had reduced Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
to
the
small part of the Correct article usage
a
store
and install a new cafe Use synonyms
area
as the main part of Use synonyms
its
.
Starting Correct pronoun usage
it
with in
2000, the Correct your spelling
within
fiction
genre accounted for Use synonyms
the
large percentage of the book Correct article usage
a
store
Use synonyms
was
located in the north and north-east Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
area
, and Fix the agreement mistake
areas
non-
Correct article usage
the non-fiction
fiction
sector was in the south of the space, and opposite with Use synonyms
the
non-Correct article usage
apply
fiction
are various types of Use synonyms
Add an article
the book
a book
book
Fix the agreement mistake
books
such
as art, hobbies, and cookery. Linking Words
Moreover
, the service desk, new books, Linking Words
travel
all Correct word choice
and travel
was
located Change the verb form
were
in
the west of the entrance.
With regard to recently's renovation, Change preposition
to
due to
the new Linking Words
area
call cafe has added into the Use synonyms
store
as the main proportion of the Use synonyms
store
in the centre with three tables. The travel, new books, and service desk Use synonyms
is
remain in the same position. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
the Linking Words
fiction
Use synonyms
area
is replaced by art, hobbies, and cookery in the north and some non-Use synonyms
fiction
is moved to the Use synonyms
north east
Correct your spelling
northeast
area
Use synonyms
instead
.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words store, fiction, area with synonyms.
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