The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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informations

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about consumers who spend

money

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different

equipments

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equipment

.In

britain

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france

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France

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italy

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and

germany

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Germany

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.One particular

points

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that

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highlighted by the figure is that Britain is one of the biggest consumers among other countries. As it is clear,

peopel

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people

britain

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have a

tendancy

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tendency

purchasing

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money

on photographic

film

,toys and CDs,with 170,167,165

tousand

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thousand

respectively.

contrast

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they are less interested to spend

money

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perfumes,tennis racquets,

personal

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and personal

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stereos.

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, in

germany

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photographic

film

,perfumes,

tennis

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racquets are as same popular as each other with 150

tousand

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thousand

.other tools are less important in

germany

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Germany

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On the other hand

,buying toys in France and Italy has

a striking similarities

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striking similarities

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with each other with just over the 155

tousand

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thousand

.Italy

spend

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money

for

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personal stereos,tennis racquets,

perfumes

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than

Frannce

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France

.and photographic

film

and CDs are interesting

between

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France people.

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film

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one of the best enjoyable tools among

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countries that they expenditure more

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, film with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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