Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

It is widely claimed that many students decide to study
further
away from their home town for universities. My reason why I believe that
this
action is
benetits
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benefits
more than drawbacks will be elaborated in
this
essay.
To begin
with, it is inevitable to argue that
live
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or
study
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far away from their place would cost more expenditure in some way because students need to pay extra money for
the
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accommodation and
traveling
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. Take an
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student
for instance
; investing money to study aboard can lead to
financial
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problem
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due to
the process of applying to college including: tutor fees, flat rental fees, and other payments.
Therefore
, it is sensible for some opponents to obtain some pessimistic consequences from
this
strategy.
However
, some people believe that
college
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period is the perfect time to explore the real world and become
an
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independent person if
their
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allocate
themselve
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themselves
to different cultures or areas.
For example
, studying in the UK with your
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major,
it
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is not only
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benefit
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for your languages skill but
also
shapes your perspective in life during the various cultures and human races when you are far away from your country. From
this
perspective, it
is clearly see
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that
choose
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to be an international student in another country can reap great benefits from it. In conclusion,
although
it is undeniable that
move
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far away from your own town can affect your financial
stable
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, I am of the opinion that being an international student in aboard university can contribute optimistic consequences in the long run for their future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural sensitivity
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • independence
  • self-reliance
  • specialized programs
  • networking
  • career opportunities
  • homesickness
  • cultural shock
  • financial strain
  • accommodation
  • cost of living
  • family relationships
  • emotional challenges
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