Imagine that your city government has given permission for a major company to build a large factory near your neighbourhood. Do you think this is a good idea? Why or why not? Explain your position using specific reasons and examples.
I strongly disagree with idea that
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
should give permission for a big company to build enormous Correct your spelling
government
industrail
plants close to society. The essay will Correct your spelling
industrial
explained
my view and Change the verb form
explain
effect
if Correct article usage
the effect
this
situation happen
. There various Change the verb form
happens
reason
why large Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
factory
near Fix the agreement mistake
factories
community
if be Correct article usage
the community
prohabited
.
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prohibited
Firstly
, it will cause air pollution and it impact
inhabitant life. Change the verb form
impacts
For example
, the harmful gas and duct from production progress will release to surrounding
area, Add an article
the surrounding
people
that live and travel in that location will get the effect. Correct word choice
and people
The
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This
resulted
in their health Replace the word
results
especially
allergic person , some of them have Add the comma(s)
,especially
running
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run
nose
, Fix the agreement mistake
noses
fever
and Fix the agreement mistake
fevers
cough
and Fix the agreement mistake
coughs
this
will effect
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affect
to
their lung Change preposition
apply
in
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for
long
period.
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a long
the long
Secondly
, dangerous
event that came from Add an article
a dangerous
the dangerous
those factory
which is unpredictable but if it Change the determiner
that factory
those factories
is happen
, Change the verb form
happens
it
will make Correct pronoun usage
they
large
impact on Add an article
a large
people
. For example
, Add an article
a bomb
the bomb
bomb
in Fix the agreement mistake
bombs
industrail
plants Correct your spelling
industrial
this
case appear in my country, some people
have to escape to other area
and seriously some Fix the agreement mistake
areas
people
dead
from that event.
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die
However
, if have factory
in Add an article
a factory
neighbourhoood
,it will create Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
Add an article
a job
job
for Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
civizen
. Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
Therefore
, they would not have to go to other place
that far from their home. In my opinion, the benefit is not Change the wording
another place
other places
worth
, their life could not Correct pronoun usage
itworth
campare
with money.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
compare
these
reason Correct determiner usage
the
that
Correct word choice
why
build
plants near society is Wrong verb form
building
bad
idea. Unfortunately, Change the article
a bad
Goverment
in some Correct your spelling
government
countrie
Correct your spelling
countries
interested
in Add a missing verb
is interested
money
that they get more than their Add an article
the money
population
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population's
life
and Replace the word
live
natural
.Replace the word
nature
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