You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The map compares the changes that took place in a

bookstore

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between the year 2000 and now . In general , fiction, nonfiction and other book areas in the

bookstore

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have accounted for some significant changes today compared to 2000. To be specific , in 2000 most of the areas in the north-west part of the

bookstore

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contained fictional

books

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only , and the other categories of

books

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like cookery , hobbies and art were located at the Central of the bookshop .

However

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, today both sections reported some dramatic changes . The fictional book section in the north direction of the

bookstore

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is divided into four different sections to store other categories of

books

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which were in the Central area of the

bookstore

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in 2000 and in the Central ,part some tables were constructed for customers.

While

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the non-fiction book division in the south side of bookstall in 2000 changed to a cafe . At the same ,time the non-fiction

books

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are taken to

northwest

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the northwest

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part of the store where fiction

books

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were kept in 2000 .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bookstore, books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

179 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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