The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

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chart graph shows the people who have cars from 1975 to 2005 in the UK.

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, 1

auto

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ownership and people who don't have any

automobile

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are the dominant given that period

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the owners of 3

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automobile

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are the lowest figure among them. Looking at the graph more closely,

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the number of 1

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owners was 45 in 1975 and

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it slightly declined to 37 in 1985. After 1985, it steadily went up in 2005 and

finally

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the same figure in 1975. The total of the population who don't have

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automobile

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was almost the same as 1 car ownership but it significantly decreased in 1985, which was eventually halved to 25. The number of 2

automobile

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owners and no

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gradually rose from 1975 to 2005. The number of people who have 3

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was 3 in 1975, which tripled in 2005 by 9.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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5 paragraphs

152 words

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The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

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