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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making traditions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In contemporary society, cultural
traditions
 or values play a significant role in maintaining the conceptual beliefs of the public
as well as
 becoming a profitable industry, boosting the national economy in general. From
this
 point, there is an emergence of many debates regarding the existence of these
traditions
 relying on their tourism financial benefits.
This
 essay will discuss both views and give the author’s idea on the issue.
To begin
 with, playing a role as a profitable industry could lead cultural
traditions
 to the loss
oftheir
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of their
 original values. There are numerous old-fashioned customs
being
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unsuitable to modern perspectives.
Therefore
, they definitely do not serve the public interests,
that is
, do not provide profitable value. From
this
 stand, lacking profitable value cause ignorance of communities for these
traditions
.
Moreover
, public interests are rapidly changing over time,
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that money-making
traditions
 can save these
traditions
. In my opinion, there are many measures to revise cultural
traditions
,not only just
make
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 money from them.
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