Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful, others think that good leadership is the reason behind the success of a company. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many nations argue that good
teamwork
makes a company
successful, whike
other Correct your spelling
while
individuals
consider that good leadership
can lead to success
of a Add an article
the success
company
. In my opinion both of them necessary
for the Add a missing verb
are necessary
company
.
On the one hand, good teamwork
is good for a company
. When employees has
good Change the verb form
have
teamwork
the company
's work
productivity will be increasing. However
, it has benefits for the employees. Firstly
their salary will be increase
. Change the verb form
be increased
Secondly
, it would be easier to work
there because if people absent
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are absent
in
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from
the
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apply
work
their team workers can help to
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For example
by the magazine called "Times
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individuals
can know that 83% of Add an article
the company
company
achieve success by helping Fix the agreement mistake
companies
teamwork
.
On the other hand
, good leadership
also
has benefits for the company
. It would be better for the company
,
if people possess Remove the comma
apply
to
good Change preposition
apply
leadership
skills
. However
it would be better for Add a comma
,However
individuals
too. Also
form
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from
magazine
called "Times" people can know that in corporations where leaders Correct article usage
a magazine
has
good Change the verb form
have
leadership
skills
quality of work
is better. the Clear vision is that,
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apply
individuals
who has
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have
leadership
skills
for
example, they Add the comma(s)
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are
can ask to leave Unnecessary verb
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from
their Change preposition
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work
earlier if they are have
some problems or plans.
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company
can achieve to
success more Change preposition
apply
effective
by having good Change the word
effectively
teamwork
and leadership
skills
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite