People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Now in the
21st century
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individuals
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life style
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lifestyle
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is better than nations who lived ages ago. I
am partly agree
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with
this
idea of statement. On the one, it is true that now nations lead
better
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a better
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quality of
life
. As technology
improving
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day by day
life
became easier than past
by
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their
helping
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.
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, in the past
people
washing
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their clothes nearby river on the stone, but when it comes
today
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to day
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individuals just put their clothes
on
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the washing machine and complete their work without difficulties.
On the other hand
, quality of
life
was better in the past. In the
past
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the quality of
life
was better without factories which is producing harmful elements.
Clear
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vision is that
,
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in the past air was clean and
people
live longer because there
was
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not
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factories and there is
not
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no
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opportunity
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an opportunity
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for launching
rocket
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a rocket
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.
However
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form
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from
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the magazine called "Times" individuals can know that
in
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average
people
live more than 80 years because of fresh air. Taking everything into consideration, I
am partly agree
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partly agree
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that now
people
life style
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lifestyle
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is better than past.
However
, there
is
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a lot of positive sides
of
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life
in the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Quality of life
  • Technological advances
  • Healthcare systems
  • Life expectancy
  • Information access
  • Digital tools
  • Comfort and convenience
  • Modern conveniences
  • Mental health
  • Environmental degradation
  • Urbanization
  • Human rights
  • Social advancement
  • Life satisfaction
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