The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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prices
can affect attendance at different entertainment events.
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sports
reached almost 200 thousand visits in 2009 , cinemas received over 1 million visitors in 2009.
When examining and making a comparison of the table with Use synonyms
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an average family of 4 people will spend 55$ on tickets to the cinema.
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same family to attends the theme park, they will spend 210$ which is around 4 times more than the cinema.
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games have different ticket Use synonyms
prices
but football matches will cost a family 280$ which is almost 6 times more than a visit to the cinema.
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this
may explain why fewer people attend Linking Words
sports
venues than cinemas.
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compare the different kinds of Linking Words
sports
venues.
If one wants to visit a Use synonyms
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game it will be cheaper to visit a cricket game than go to a football match.
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prices
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