You have recently moved to a new place and haven't got a chance to tell your friend.write a letter to your friend. Where and why you move from there? Compare your new place with old. Where do you live now?

Dear John, Hope all is well at your end I am writing

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letter to you because I am shifting to a new apartment

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my work which is far from my old place. Here I would like to share my experience with you.

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, I moved from Surrey to Queensland because of my profession. As I am an account manager in an international business market company, in Surrey. Recently, my employer gave me a promotion, and I transferred to Queensland to handle the department as a manager.

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, my new place is well furnished and all the modern equipment is installed in the kitchen.

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, my new flat is wider as compared to the old one.

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, one small garden and one study room and I can easily focus on my work without disturbing my family members. All in all, I live in the central city next to the well famous museum. In the end, I will meet you next Friday because I throw a party for friends and family to celebrate my promotion

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for a new place. Warm wishes, Eva.

rajveersra55Fri Feb 24 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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189 words

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