Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is indisputable fact that the country's ways are one of the crucial facilities provided by the

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. Some

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believe the funds should be more used on railways. In apropos of the statement, I partially agree

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the functions of each

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. The

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is an essential role for

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who travels a long-time journey. In fact, the train is commonly used by society all around the world. With trains,

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will have less pollution and fewer traffic loads.

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, the national authorities should pay attention

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the

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due to

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a healthy and prosperous environment. To illustrate

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, the

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in Japan is focusing the money on railways, resulting in the development of the train and producing safety and satisfaction among the population in the country.

On the other hand

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, roads

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also

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crucial to be concerned

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the

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. Presumably, the

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has been used every day

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people

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and has essential functions,

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as

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for work and used by cars and other public transportation. If the

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is broken, there will be some detrimental effects on populations.

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, if there is a big hole in the

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, and

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do not realise it,

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there will be a major accident

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and will be happened continuously.

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will increase the percentage of mortality rate in the country.

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, it can

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decrease the satisfaction rate among crowds because they can not ride the vehicle if the

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is broken and tend to walk even though the place is

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away.

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, I personally partially agree if the

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only focused on the

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. I realized that the

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is important for

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's lives,

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the national authorities should

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focus on roads because it is

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beneficial for the crowd.