Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is indisputable fact that the country's ways are one of the crucial facilities provided by the

government

. Some

people

believe the funds should be more used on railways. In apropos of the statement, I partially agree

due to

the functions of each

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. The

railway

is an essential role for

people

who travels a long-time journey. In fact, the train is commonly used by society all around the world. With trains,

people

will have less pollution and fewer traffic loads.

Consequently

, the national authorities should pay attention

on

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the

railway

due to

a healthy and prosperous environment. To illustrate

this

, the

government

in Japan is focusing the money on railways, resulting in the development of the train and producing safety and satisfaction among the population in the country.

On the other hand

, roads

also

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crucial to be concerned

by

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the

government

. Presumably, the

road

has been used every day

for

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people

and has essential functions,

such

as

place

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for work and used by cars and other public transportation. If the

road

is broken, there will be some detrimental effects on populations.

For example

, if there is a big hole in the

road

, and

people

do not realise it,

then

there will be a major accident

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and will be happened continuously.

This

will increase the percentage of mortality rate in the country.

In addition

, it can

also

decrease the satisfaction rate among crowds because they can not ride the vehicle if the

road

is broken and tend to walk even though the place is

further

away.

To sum up

, I personally partially agree if the

government

only focused on the

railway

. I realized that the

railway

is important for

people

's lives,

whereas

the national authorities should

also

focus on roads because it is

also

beneficial for the crowd.