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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

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There is no doubt everyone seeks
happiness
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. Folk believe that having a lot of
money
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 brings
happiness
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 in
life
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. In
this
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 essay, I am going to answer how
money
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 can increase
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people
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life
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 satisfaction and it elaborates on other ways which are sources of
happiness
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. having
money
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 makes
life
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 more comfortable. The majority believe that
money
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 plays an important role in everyone’s
life
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.
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, with
money
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,
people
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 can provide lots of facilities, which they can enjoy more in their
life
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.
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, these
people
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 can buy better houses and
car
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;
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, go on luxury travel around the world without concern.
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, Reach parents can make a better future for children by sending them to private schools and abroad universities.
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, getting sick at any age is not an issue for them because they have access to the best hospitals.
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, there are many factors that can make
people
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 glad, which are not dependent on
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. to have families and friends that a person can count on them any time and share their feeling with them.
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, lots of families don’t have
money
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 to send their children to private school or take them to travel around the world, but they share lots of pure love with their family members;
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, they support them in difficult situations, which is a great gift for anyone. In conclusion, in my opinion;
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,
money
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 is one way to achieve gratification, it is not the mere one. Some other factors can be considered as a source of
happiness
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 in our
life
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such
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 as family, friends, and love.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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