You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words

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Dear sir, My name is Harjeet and I am looking for a job near my home. I saw your advertisement on social media
along with
you are searching for employees for your restaurant. To start with, I am doing the same job in the bar as a waitress but now I want to leave
this
job because
this
bar is too far away from my house and I have to change two buses for it.
Also
, the bar is not safe for girls
due to
drunk people.
Thus
, I want to change my work.
However
, I have an experience in
this
field so I can easily do it. The reason is that your restaurant is near my house which is just 10 minutes of walking distance.
Therefore
, I will start early in the morning on the time. I have time next Monday if you agree
then
I will come for an interview and I can start it that week. I will wait for your good response as soon as possible. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Harjeet.
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Opening Clarity
Make sure your opening sentence clearly states the purpose of the letter.
Sentence Variety
Consider using varying sentence structures to enhance the readability and engagement of your letter.
Clarity on Current Commitments
It's great that you mentioned your availability for the interview, but clarifying your current commitments would help in understanding your immediate availability.
Salutation and Closing Formality
Use a more formal salutation and closing in professional or application letters, such as 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and 'Yours faithfully,' when the recipient's name is not known.
Relevance and Suitability
Your letter clearly communicates your experience and suitability for the job, which is excellent.
Structural Clarity
You've done well to structure your paragraphs, each with a clear point - current situation, suitability, and interview availability.
Personal Rationale
Including specific reasons for wanting to change jobs (distance and safety) adds a personal and compelling rationale to your application.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • currently employed
  • customer service
  • communication skills
  • multitasking
  • hospitality industry
  • reliable
  • adaptable
  • enthusiastic
  • available for an interview
  • start immediately
  • experience
  • flexible schedule
  • team player
  • references
  • skills and abilities
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