In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

The

internet

has become a vital part

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human life and it has been used for many purposes like

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a job

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job

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and other things .

This

essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of

internet

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and provide a suitable conclusion. On the one hand , there are several advantages

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the

Internet

.

Firstly

, it helps

people

to keep in touch with their

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ones . As we can see that in the past it was hard for

people

to communicate with each other

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if they were in different places .

However

, today with the advent of the

internet

, it has become easy to communicate with other individuals.

For example

, there are many applications like WhatsApp and Facebook ; which assist

people

to contact

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their friends and families .

In addition

, the

internet

also

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people

in their education and job purposes . Most employees nowadays are doing their work in their comfort zones and the same can be seen for students too.

For instance

, during

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pandemic

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most entrepreneurs conducted most of their

presention

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presentations

through applications like zoom so that they can do their work without any difficulties .

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks too. The

internet

is

virtual

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world so it is a good opportunity for criminals to commit crimes

in

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the

internet

. We can see that

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most

people

today use the

internet

for banking and other purposes

therefore

, it has become easy for criminals like hackers to perpetrate cyber crimes.

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Furthermore

, by using the

internet

people

are

also

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in the virtual world and

thus

,

effecting

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their social and locomotive skills which helps them to be active and healthy in their life . So as

result

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they are becoming unhealthy and inactive in their lives .

To conclude

, it is obvious that the

internet

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so many disadvantages .

However

, I think that it is more beneficial for

people

because it is helping

the

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individuals in all

part

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parts

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of their life.