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In some countries, people live with their parents and siblings until their old age. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this behaviour? Discuss your opinion and provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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It is considered normal in some countries to live with
parents
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 and siblings for the most part of
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life. I do not support
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 idea because it not only makes relationships with
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 worse
,
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 but
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 creates a great
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 of issues in one’s marriage. Living in a parental home may seem an excellent idea at
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but in reality the atmosphere there is frequently tense and nervous.
Parents
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 are used to the role of rulers and tend to keep
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 position no matter how old their child is,
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 children grow up and want their opinion to be considered.
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, lots of disagreements take place, which
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 the microclimate at home.
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, most of those who moved out of their
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parents’
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 house agree that their connection with
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parents
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 stepped to the next level as they have
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 reasons to conflict. Another challenge is to create a new family inside one’s own. If a person gets married and decides to live with
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 or in-laws, they should not only get used to the lack of privacy, but
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 to the constant interference in personal matters.
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, when a couple has a quarrel, there always are witnesses around giving “valuable” advice. The case gets even more complicated when a baby is born. Young
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 have to guard their upbringing ideas as they are often criticized by the older generation.
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conclusion,
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 living with
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 and siblings may be comforting, most of the time it makes family members disconnected and unable to create a household they truly need.
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