The charts below provide information on popular modes of transport in the city of Cambridge for the years 2008 and 2018.
These pie charts depict information on popular types of transport in Cambridge between 2008 and 2018. It is clear from the graph that in 2018 car usage percentage decreased to a fifth.
lowest figures at 17 for bicycles and 11 for walking.
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what is shown, In 2008 there is a minor proportion of walking, So we see the per cent of the van have the highest in the first order which was 42% Linking Words
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, Busses come at 30 percentage, Linking Words
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bicycles and walking representLinking Words
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On the other hand
, In 2018 we see that the number of modes of transport was similar, As shown by the graphs bicycles have 30 per cent and a fifth of the motor. Linking Words
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, we can see busses and walking have the same percentages, the quarter for both.
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To sum up
, we could say that relying on trucks in 2008 more than other transport ways, Linking Words
On the contrary
in 2018 we can see that the ratios were balanced.Linking Words
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