The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The provided two pie graphs demonstrate the proportion of males and females who are either employed or self-employed the results are three Manual and three Non-Manual, sex and occupation from the
year
1992.
Overall
, It can be clearly seen that the highest of
men
and
women
was an increase of 36% with 29% by Managerial and professional in the
year
1992. On contrary, General labourers was holding a minor portion with 2% and 1% in the
year
1992. The higher of
men
was occupied by six twentieth portion within 26% and the lowest of
women
was the seven twentieth portion within 27% from other manuals.
Women
were about 31% more considerable by one-thirtieth fraction than
men
were about 6% a tiny by the sixth fraction from Clerical or related in the proportion. The other non-manual was the ninth of
women
and the sixth of
men
in the fraction. In conclusion, the two pie graphs indicate employees and self-employed of sex and occupation
year
1992 duration what is managerial and professional overwhelming,
furthermore
, manual are both craft or similar and other manuals significant.
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