The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

The line graph shows the data on British
car
owners over the span of 30 years.
Overall
,
car
ownership in the UK with one to three types of
this
mode of transportation has an increasing trend. In contrary, the figure for citizens with no
car
has a decreasing trend between 1975 to 2005.
To begin
with, in 1975 the citizens of the UK with 3 cars have an estimated
data
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of just under 5 and went up slowly to 2005 with almost 10. Meanwhile, the population that owns 2 cars had numbered about 7 in 1975.
Then
in 1985,
car
ownership increased gradually until 2005 just under 20.
On the other hand
, in 1975 the British with 1
car
had the highest number among the four groups at 45. There was a considerable drop in the statistic of 1
car
owner in 1985 approximately 38 and
then
increased significantly to the same level at 45 in 2005.
In contrast
, the people with no
car
in 1975 has a total number of almost 43. The population plummet sharply to 25 in 1985 and
then
go down moderately to about 23 in 2005.
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