The pie chart shows change sin 4 employment sector in two towns.
The two pie charts show employment in manufacturing, hospitality, engineering, and teaching in two towns in the years 2009 and 2020.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there was a significant increase in the number of Linking Words
people
employed in the manufacturing Use synonyms
sector
Use synonyms
while
in town B, fewer Linking Words
people
were employed in the same Use synonyms
sector
.
In town A, the number of Use synonyms
people
employed in the manufacturing Use synonyms
sector
in 2009 was 20%, which became tripled in 2020, accounting for 60%. Hospitality experienced a mere difference of only 4% in 2020. Meanwhile, the engineering Use synonyms
sector
accounted for 60% of employed Use synonyms
people
, but Use synonyms
this
figure observed a huge fall by 2020, standing at 17%. Linking Words
However
, the teaching Linking Words
sector
did not change much.
In regard to town B, 2/5 Use synonyms
people
had been employed in manufacturing, which declined to a quarter in 2020. Use synonyms
However
, the proportion of Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
in
teaching Change preposition
apply
was
almost doubled in 2020. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the ratio remained stable for engineering at 35% in both years. Linking Words
While
the percentage of Linking Words
people
employed in hospitality increased by 5% after 11 years.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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