The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
points
earned by three different
teams
,
teams
A,
B
and C, in four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005. It is evident that
team
B
scored by far the most in every season,
while
team
A got minor
points
in total. In 2002,
while
team
B
scored 82
points
, the highest of all time in 4 seasons,
teams
A and C got only a few
points
(5 and 10, respectively). The
score
of
team
B
fell to 60 in 2003, and
teams
A and C experienced a tiny increase,
although
they remained far lower than
team
B
. There was significant growth in
team
A’s
score
in 2004, to 35
points
, seven times higher than in 2002.
On the other hand
,
team
B
’s
score
again noticeably decreased by 17
points
at the same time,
whereas
team
C’s
score
marginally fell by 3
points
.
However
, the season of 2005 was a turnover, when
team
B
’s
score
rocketed to 55
points
,
team
A’s
score
markedly fell back to 8
points
, and
team
C’s
score
declined to 5. Anyhow,
team
B
got by far the most
points
among the three
teams
in every season.
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