The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
points
earned by three different teams
, teams
A, B
and C, in four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005. It is evident that team
B
scored by far the most in every season, while
team
A got minor points
in total.
In 2002, while
team
B
scored 82 points
, the highest of all time in 4 seasons, teams
A and C got only a few points
(5 and 10, respectively). The score
of team
B
fell to 60 in 2003, and teams
A and C experienced a tiny increase, although
they remained far lower than team
B
.
There was significant growth in team
A’s score
in 2004, to 35 points
, seven times higher than in 2002. On the other hand
, team
B
’s score
again noticeably decreased by 17 points
at the same time, whereas
team
C’s score
marginally fell by 3 points
. However
, the season of 2005 was a turnover, when team
B
’s score
rocketed to 55 points
, team
A’s score
markedly fell back to 8 points
, and team
C’s score
declined to 5. Anyhow, team
B
got by far the most points
among the three teams
in every season.Submitted by Hein Htet Aung
on
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