You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problems • propose a solution

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Dear Mr John, I am a student tenant living in one of your private accommodations in Brighton, and I must critically state the unresolved concerns that I and other tenants are experiencing inside the hostel. Over the past two weeks, I have complained bitterly about the issues with the hot water and heating system that isn't working in my lodge. I must commend the efforts of your technical team that have been working tirelessly to solve it,

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, all have been to no avail.

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the electrician discovered some faulty heaters and has placed an order for new ones which were delivered yesterday, still, they aren't working perfectly. As a solution, and because I really love your agency, I would advise that in the meantime

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solutions are being proffered to

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hot water problem, you should provide me with temporary accommodation to stay in other available lodges within Brighton until everything is resolved. Thanks for your understanding. Yours sincerely, Moses.

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coherence cohesion

Try to enhance the logical flow between paragraphs for even greater coherence.

task achievement

Ensure that your solution proposal is clear and concise.

task achievement

The letter retains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with a landlord.

coherence cohesion

The paragraphs are generally well-structured and coherent with clear points made about the ongoing problem and suggested solution.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation
tenant
landlord
maintenance
heating system
certified heating engineer
temporary arrangement
compensation
inconvenience
discomfort
urgency
prompt response
professional assessment
cooperate
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