The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the way how
bricks
used in the constructions are made.
Overall
, it is a linear, man-made process with seven stages, beginning with the digging up of
clay
and ending with the delivery of the
bricks
. First of all, the
clay
utilized for brick production is dug up from the ground by a giant digger.
This
clay
is
then
placed onto a metal grid in order to break up the
clay
into smaller pieces. A roller transfers the separated
clay
to the next stage, where sand and water are added.
Afterward
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,
this
mixture is turned into brick by either placing it into a
mold
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or using a wire cutter.
Next,
the
bricks
are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours. In the subsequence stage, dried
bricks
go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and
then
a high temperature (ranging from 200C-1300C), followed by a cooling process kept in a cooling chamber for 2-3 days. Eventually, the fine
bricks
are delivered to their destinations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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