The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the way how
bricks
used in the constructions are made. Overall
, it is a linear, man-made process with seven stages, beginning with the digging up of clay
and ending with the delivery of the bricks
.
First of all, the clay
utilized for brick production is dug up from the ground by a giant digger. This
clay
is then
placed onto a metal grid in order to break up the clay
into smaller pieces. A roller transfers the separated clay
to the next stage, where sand and water are added. Afterward
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Afterwards
this
mixture is turned into brick by either placing it into a mold
or using a wire cutter. Change the spelling
mould
Next,
the bricks
are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours.
In the subsequence stage, dried bricks
go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then
a high temperature (ranging from 200C-1300C), followed by a cooling process kept in a cooling chamber for 2-3 days. Eventually, the fine bricks
are delivered to their destinations.Submitted by Hein Htet Aung
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