The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the way how
bricks
used in the constructions are made. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is a linear, man-made process with seven stages, beginning with the digging up of Linking Words
clay
and ending with the delivery of the Use synonyms
bricks
.
First of all, the Use synonyms
clay
utilized for brick production is dug up from the ground by a giant digger. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
clay
is Use synonyms
then
placed onto a metal grid in order to break up the Linking Words
clay
into smaller pieces. A roller transfers the separated Use synonyms
clay
to the next stage, where sand and water are added. Use synonyms
Afterward
, Change the spelling
Afterwards
this
mixture is turned into brick by either placing it into a Linking Words
mold
or using a wire cutter. Change the spelling
mould
Next,
the Linking Words
bricks
are placed in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours.
In the subsequence stage, dried Use synonyms
bricks
go through a heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and Use synonyms
then
a high temperature (ranging from 200C-1300C), followed by a cooling process kept in a cooling chamber for 2-3 days. Eventually, the fine Linking Words
bricks
are delivered to their destinations.Use synonyms
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